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Monday, February 13, 2012

The Letter my shoe sent me


The letter my shoe sent me
Was just few words long
Use me, clean me, keep me
Yet its memory lingers on

The letter my shoe sent me
Was clear, concise and simple
Though written in faint ink
The mark it made remains indelible

The letter my shoe sent me
Is like one I myself once wrote
To my teacher, lean and mean
A tiny scribbled note

The letter my shoe sent me
Was just 3 words long
Polish, not punish
So its memory lingers on...

1 comment:

Thoth the Wordsmith said...

Nice one, backed up with emphasis on the same phrase, cool pun (lean and mean). Simple diction with direct words, but lacks enough imagery (i wan visualise na)